http://www.theguardian.com/world/2015/nov/22/brussels-faces-week-on-lockdown-as-hunt-for-terror-cell-intensifies
This article is about the Belgium capital Brussels under week long lock down as a means to hunt for terrorist extremists, this is mostly connected to the Paris attack last week, and it makes many ties to that to make this especially relevant, in particular it mentions the current situation of one of the attacker's and his whereabouts as he's attempting to run away, it mentions how in particular it's believed that the lock down on Brussel and other de facto capitals is because that current raids have not yet found him yet, this piece of information is obviously shocking to others and to me, as it shows the lengths of which they are going to capture this single person.
I believe this article is particularly shocking, as the long duration of lock downs, is causing Schools, work places, and other elements of every lives, to be disrupted because of it. This is exactly the thing that Terrorists like ISIS would want, for the world to be shaped by their actions and people's ways of living to be halted by them, and I think it's kind of disheartening to see that in this sense we have lost to them by almost meeting what they want. Although I am aware that this is a necessary evil to make sure that such an incident does not happen again.
The Guardian is a most relevant news paper because it's a British news paper, meaning that it's relevant to report on what's happening in Europe and surrounding countries.
You article was very understandable and brief. However you could include visual content such as images and videos to enhance your article and make it more fascinating to read and also making your headline bold enough and stand out to capture the intended audience. Over all it was good. well done.
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